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The moon is so bright
it lights up the sky at night
Along with the stars
The sky shines
From earth it looks like a dot
But near the moon you see it takes up a lot
To me it looks like a gem




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Monday October 03, 2011, CourtneyMM (United States):
I like your pome alot!! What was your insperation on the pome??
Friday October 07, 2011, AlexusS (United States):
Nice poem, I think this is just my opinion you should add a picture of the moon!
Wednesday October 12, 2011, JuliannaK (United States):
Really awesome poem, it tells a story! Nice job.
Thursday October 13, 2011, JoeyM (United States):
Nice poem!! I love the rhymes!!
Thursday October 13, 2011, DanielleM (United States):
I think that is a really nice poem about the Moon. It describes it a lot.
Thursday October 20, 2011, lucyc (United States):
That is a really cool poem, but it need's a picture thhen it will be great!
Monday October 24, 2011, LilyC (China):
很漂亮的图片!充分体现了月亮的美、皎洁与朦胧。
Tuesday November 29, 2011, Breanna CM (United States):
I like your poem! It has some funny, but true facts.
Tuesday December 27, 2011, NancyR (United States):
I love your pictures Kay! congrats on your poem! Please commnent me!
Wednesday February 15, 2012, Gracelp (United States):
That was a really good poem!
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