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 Pre Writing
Marion Sarah Peyton School, Marion, Maryland, USA
Teacher:  Mary Pruitt
Hello, everyone from Somerset County, Maryland.  The following is the prewriting that we did as we ate our lunch seated on the ground in the middle of a saltwater marsh on Sept. 23rd.
 
 

What do we see right now and what have we already seen this morning? 

Birds of prey 
Red-tailed hawk ("Chicken hawk") 
Black vulture 
Great horned owl 
Barn owls 
Screech owl feather 
Scavengers 
Mr. Nick (Nick Carter) 
Environment/ Ecology 
Cycle of Nature 
Spartina 
Black needle rush 
Three square plant 
Wigid grass 
Shark teeth 
Giant turtle shell 
Snake eggs inside snake 
Marsh grasses and water all around 
Mantis shrimp 
Diamond back turtle 
Little "islands" 
Hummingbird 
Stingray 
Leg bands for ducks 
Sunny skies/ Sun sparkling on water 
It looks like the "Lion King"/ like Africa because dry and grassy 
Oysters 
Spats 
Filter feeders 
Mud crabs 
Skillet fish 
Gobi fish Muskrat 
Otter 
Beaver/ dams/ lodges 

Animal skulls 
Praying mantis 
Animal fur/ hide 
Bee hive 
Plants/ cattails 
Wild flowers 
Telephone poles 
Clouds 
Crickets 
Frogs 
Water moving 
Male duck/ wood duck 
Blue crab 
Goose 
Crab pot 
Crabs shedding 
How to hold and catch a crab 
How to tag wildfowl 
How to tell a male duck from a female 
How to tell a male crab from a female 
Snowy egrets 
American eel 
Alien plants 
Stalks for pens 
Ink 
Red fox 
Algae 
Cattails on edge 
Big teeth on mammals 
Tapered bodies 
Valves in ear and nose of otter 
Coarse hairs 
Clumps of trees 
horizon 
 

 

What do we hear?
The wind blowing the plants around
Crickets singing
Frog sounds
Birds singing
Wind blowing
Water moving
Voices
Cars - echo in open space
Ducks quacking
Crabs moving
Calm
Peaceful
 

What do we smell?
Salt water
Freshness/ Fresh air
Damp smell
Sweet smell from yellow flowers
Marshy smell
Algae at the oyster station
 

What do we feel?
Breezy, windy
Peaceful
Comfortable
Cool
Warm sunshine
 
 
Other vocabulary we heard: 
indigenous 
nocturnal 
balance of nature 
scavenger 
migrate 
spawn 
nutria 
erosion 
taxidermist 
negative factor 
positive factor 
valves 
guard hairs 
near-sighted 
alien 
squirrels 
rabbits 
patches 
heron 
feathers 
stimulate 
destructive 
habitat 
transferred 
cattail 
phragmites 
stalk 
 
 

Note:  These students are not yet familiar with the term adjectives.  As  we go back and look at our prewriting to prepare for writing essays, I will be doing mini-lessons on the parts of speech.  We felt it was more
important on the day of the trip to get the students' thoughts down while they were in the actual environment.
 



 

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