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Pre Writing
Ullis Newton, Henderson Nevada
Teacher: Shanna Giraldes
We chose the Galleria Mall as our site to describe because it is a cool
place to hang out. It is the coolest place to buy things. I mean there are
lots of candy stores, clothing stores, and toy stores. The Galleria Mall has a huge
Arcade. It is the biggest and only mall in Henderson, Nevada. The Galleria
Mall has a huge food court with lots of selections. They have a cool Halloween shop where,
if you go there, you will be scared out of your mind. Many people buy clothes in the
mall. The Game Keeper is
the 2nd biggest toy store. It is my favorite because it has lots of Pokemon stuff.
The Galleria Mall is a great place for kids.
Shanna Giraldes
Henderson, NV
Ulis Newton Elementary School
I'm running behind in posting my students descriptions. Computer
problems, need I say more? We have started writing our final essay and
should finish by the deadline.
Here are our impressions of the Galleria Mall:
Smells
fresh baked foods and cookies coffee
perfume soap
new shoes cigarette smoke
new clothes Cinnabon cinnamon rolls
garbage sweet chocolate and butterscotch
soap-garden of flowers corn dog- buttery moist pastry surrounding a
plump juicy hotdog
Sounds
talking water trickling down from the waterfall
screaming Ricky Martin music
fighting munching and slurping
cash registers ringing voices of many people echoed like chattering
birds
Halloween music kittens meowing / puppies barking
See
people walking purple dinosaur
people working water pouring out of the walls
stores waves tremble in the water
food Indian earrings, pottery and dolls
clothes valet parking attendants
shoes glass elevator
trees shaped like animals stain glass windows
bumpy escalator tiled floor-shiny and smooth as ice
shaped like a gigantic stadium multiple colored neon signs and displays
looked like Christmas tree lights
Feel
soft touch of clothes rubbery fake throw up
grease on fries rough carpet
cold elevator kittens that feel like large warm balls of cotton
comfy pillow-
Taste
mint spray stuff lotion - yuck
orange chicken and noodles
Extras
1.1 miles around the inside of the mall
about 200 stores
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